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Smash Rising Mods ([personal profile] mansionstaff) wrote 2014-05-03 04:01 am (UTC)

Moderator Review

Thank you for your interest in Smash Academy! Edea sounds like a very interesting character, however we feel that your personality section lacks substance and more of the traits that define her. The ideals of justice and injustice are very important to her as a person and do represent keypoints to her personality and how she is as an individual. Despite that, however, there is more to her and we feel that your personality section doesn't appropriately demonstrate that to us.

Could you please expand more on what drives her, motivates her, and who she is when she isn't obsessed with the idea of justice? For instance: do her loyalties lie strictly with her concepts of justice or is she capable of focusing her loyalties to friends and commrades? Could you also explain where the bikini thing is coming from, as it feels wholly random in light of the rest of her seriously justice driven character.

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