We think you have a good start! However, Junko is an incredibly complex character and we feel that the application only provides a surface review of her personality (or personalities, as it were). We'd like to see a deeper examination of her motivations. If you plan to have her masquerade as Ryouko, we'd also like some information regarding how she'd behave as this persona. Additionally, we find the first-person sample to be very narrative on Junko's part in a way she does not display in the games. Please expand the personality section and revise the first person sample to be more indicative of Junko's inner psyche, motivations, and behavioral patterns--tell us not just how she is but why she is the way she is.