Acacia's got an excellent start, but we would like to see just a little more polish in the personality and backstory. Please elaborate on some of her character flaws and negative traits a little more. You hint that she's selfish, which fits in well with her sassy nature, but how does that affect her when it comes to her team mates? Was she that self-driven when it came to meeting The One or did she change and grow at all on her journey? Did the group dynamic change at all when Acacia was introduced, or not really? Does Acacia ever go too far with her teasing, or her temper? What happens when Blue has to reprimand her for her behavior? Or what would theoretically happen?

Please tighten up the personality and backstory a little with these questions in mind. The samples are just fine.

Thank you!