mansionstaff: (Open Hand)
Smash Rising Mods ([personal profile] mansionstaff) wrote 2016-01-16 07:44 pm (UTC)

Revision request part dos!

Hello! Thanks for the revision and it's a good addition. But there is a lack of substance overall for the character and we feel there could be more. An understanding of the character and what makes her stand out in her story is key. What made her become this way, what drives her personality, who is she amongst her peers and how she sees herself amongst them. The wiki is lacking and it is A-OK to headcanon so long as it doesn't contradict game-canon so that you can fill in what's not in the wiki.

Maybe there are other sources that you can extrapolate from? A manga perhaps? Thanks again and we're looking forward to seeing them here.

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